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Post by chimes- on Sun Mar 01, 2009 3:21 pm

I loved the way you held me tight
When everything was wrong.
The way you talked to make me laugh
And told me I should be strong.
I loved the way your cheeks went red
Everytime you were embarrassed.
The way you always tried to shake it off
You definitely were the rarest.
I loved the way you pranced around
When everybody giggled.
You tried to make some sort of song
Some song about a pickle.
I loved just how corny you were
Just like a fresh cob of corn.
You were so sweet..just soo sweet
But you could be sour, I had sworn.
But all-in-all
You are the best.
And I wish that you were here.
But the only thing I'm worried about
Is you saying no once more.
It hurt to hear it (especially over the phone)
When laughing was all I could hear (on your side at least)
While I silently cried on the other end.

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C/c
Note: I think that there is only one person here who understands this poem.
But yeah..anyway, not the best I've done...I definitely know that.












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Post by chung chin on Sun Mar 01, 2009 3:40 pm

who that one person? anyway I think its REALLY good!! Razz
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Post by chimes- on Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:15 pm

thanks...
and Im not sure if I really want to share.. silent
hopefully you dont feel offended.
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Post by Ruri on Sun Mar 01, 2009 5:49 pm

Heh.. yeah, I know what it's about

Nicely written though. No, not your best, but certainly not the worst
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Post by chimes- on Mon Mar 02, 2009 1:49 pm

Lol, thanks
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