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Re: Hell, to me, is a place called home

Post by Kazuma on Tue Mar 03, 2009 4:11 pm

nice nice... i like the ending even though it was demonic and you have improved and I feel the meaning to the poem. yet I would have liked you to expand a little cuz i got the feeling but not enough
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Re: Hell, to me, is a place called home

Post by Ruri on Tue Mar 03, 2009 5:53 pm

Nicely written.
I agree with Kaz. Could have been longer, but I think you've improved.
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Re: Hell, to me, is a place called home

Post by chung chin on Wed Mar 04, 2009 4:33 pm

I'll try.. when i get enough time... Historica and other homework takes a lot out of me
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Re: Hell, to me, is a place called home

Post by chimes- on Thu Mar 05, 2009 6:01 am

Well this was an interesting poem....
I agree with the Kaz on the ending though.
Throwing up....yummmmmm
Anyway, other then that, good job :]
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Re: Hell, to me, is a place called home

Post by Satanic on Mon Mar 09, 2009 2:19 pm

It was a good poem.
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Re: Hell, to me, is a place called home

Post by chung chin on Mon Mar 09, 2009 7:04 pm

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