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Post by Eissa_Me_Mario on Fri Mar 20, 2009 2:08 pm





it's a song without title
a song without word
a song without sound

a song in our eyes
a song in our ears
a song in our hands
a song in our feet

We are singing the song
without title
a nameless song
It's a distant song
It's a future song

A song who says:
beyond future, beyond distances,
beyond nothing, beyond always

a song in a single colour
that we don't see

many colours
much colours
unknown colours

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Post by chimes- on Mon Mar 23, 2009 1:39 pm

this is an odd poem....it's definitely not your best
My advice for this one would be to probably make it not as choppy, and make it flow a bit more.
But it's still nice in it's own way :]
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Post by 49hacker on Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:57 pm

Mad you say song too much! its annoying
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Post by Satanic on Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:09 pm

I agree, with the poem, songs have no shape or look. They are what you make them...
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Post by 49hacker on Fri Mar 27, 2009 2:29 pm

i disagree it has a different feeling depending on the genre
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