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Post by Eissa_Me_Mario on Tue Feb 10, 2009 12:20 pm

I hope you're happy
I hope you're proud
I hope you know how I felt
When you said 'Three's a crowd'

I don't hope you suffer
I don't hope you die
But I hope you know it's your fault
I can no longer fly

I hope you can feel
I hope you can see
I hope you get abandoned
Like you did to me

I hope you know you succeeded
I hope you know you won
I hope you know you broke me
I still can't see the sun

I will leave it at that
Even though there is more
Like all the pain
I have yet to thank you for
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Post by Kazuma on Tue Feb 10, 2009 12:22 pm

wow Choni, that was pretty good!!! I think you have talent, and have very special skill in English literature.
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TY

Post by Eissa_Me_Mario on Tue Feb 10, 2009 12:24 pm

haha well thx
i get inspiration from ppl around me
i have another one about a great friend who itroduced me to this site

A true friend
A true friend is the one who picks you up when you fall
A true friend is one that won't lie
A true friend is there when you call
A true friend is there when you want to die
A true friend knows just what to say
A true friend won't care what other people think
A true friend will help you find your way
A true friend will make sure you don't sink
A true friend will help you choose your path
A true friend will know when something is wrong
A true friend has to sometimes face your wrath
A true friend makes you feel like you belong
A true friend


- Dedecated to a special friend PK
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Post by Kazuma on Tue Feb 10, 2009 12:27 pm

I wonder who that was..... post more of your poems here though. I can help were you went wrong and I'm sure others will as well.

Make a new topic if you wish and make the topic name the name of your poem because I'm looking forward to seeing more.



Also don't double post....
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Post by Moshuko on Tue Feb 10, 2009 3:06 pm

Great poems, I erased your dbl post and edited the first one to add the poem to it..

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Post by Kazuma on Tue Feb 10, 2009 3:16 pm

Thanks Mosh,

Also Choni, make a topic with the title of your poem like example

"I Died" By Choni

Get it??
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Post by XtremeX17 on Tue Feb 10, 2009 3:19 pm

Very nice poems!
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Post by Moshuko on Tue Feb 10, 2009 3:19 pm

or I died: By Choni.. Either way it looks good but my way may be a bit more satisfactory. =D

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Post by Zero on Thu Feb 12, 2009 7:01 pm

Wow your pretty good. Of course I have seen better and your poems are kind of lacking some mateiral plus they are also very demonic. Try to make things a little more happy because I feel so gloomy after I read this.

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Post by Kazuma on Fri Feb 13, 2009 4:43 pm

But poems are a way on how to express emotions. If shes expressing a sad poem than that means she sad.
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Post by Zero on Sun Feb 15, 2009 1:48 pm

True but after I read that i rembered my past relationship and that makes me sad.

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Post by Eissa_Me_Mario on Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:12 pm

well im sorry ur relationships didnt go well
but as u can see neither did mine
so i tried mpoetry insteed of screaming
and it clicked
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Post by Zero on Fri Feb 20, 2009 2:20 pm

well no offense but just don't post something so sad. Poetry is an art not a depress fest.

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Post by Eissa_Me_Mario on Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:27 pm

Well it can be. I mean poetry is a way of expressing your feeling, sad or happy. Anf honestly I'd like to see one of ur poems
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Post by Shinjid on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:35 am

nice poems. You rlly have some talent you know

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Post by Eissa_Me_Mario on Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:23 am

thank you Very Happy
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Post by Satanic on Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:50 pm

WOW that was a great, it was better than that time i killed all the jews!!
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Post by chimes- on Tue Mar 10, 2009 2:52 pm

adolf hitler wrote:WOW that was a great, it was better than that time i killed all the jews!!

This is NOT funny whatsoever. You obviously don't understand the painful and horrifying events Jews went through. I have 2 words for you. GROW UP
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Post by Ruri on Tue Mar 10, 2009 5:19 pm

Thank you chimes!

Choni, good poems - both of them
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