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Post by Eissa_Me_Mario on Tue Feb 10, 2009 12:40 pm

Thought I wouldn't find out,
didn't care how I felt.

Well guess what I know,
about you and her.
That girl,
I used to call a friend.

Remember you told me,
when you were about to walk out on me.
I tried to get you to stay,
I should have let you leave.

I should have pushed you away,
instead I went numb,
I couldn't feel a thing.

I didnt know of the tears,
drifting down my cheek.
I don't hear the lonly sounds,
as i started to weep.

I should have kicked you out of my life
to bad i was so nieve.
I wanted you so bad,


Guess what,
now i want nothing from you,
nothing at all.
Now that you are gone,

Out of my life for good,
I can be me,
I dont have to hide or change,
I dont have to be so quiet,
afraid or scared.

I can be me,
thats all that I am.
Im tired of hiding,

But not anymore,
for you are no longer my guy

Your a stranger,
a guy i could never love.
A guy i will never love again.
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Post by Kazuma on Tue Feb 10, 2009 12:45 pm

Nice poem but I think the parts should be a little longer. It kind of seemed rushed a little.
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Post by Eissa_Me_Mario on Tue Feb 10, 2009 12:46 pm

while i had to stop my self from swearing Razz
but thx for the advise
it was about two ppl
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