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Post by Satanic on Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:25 pm

My generation is the one that’s gonna make it right
We do it everyday, we do it every night

And we don’t wanna be the same as everybody was
We ain’t about the lies, we ain’t about the fuzz

I know that we can do it, anything you wanna have
We ain’t afraid to come together, ain’t afraid to laugh

So do it up your way, you wanna take the ride
You never run, you’ll never need to hide

I know you get it man, I know you understand
I got a feeling that you’re already in on the plan

Im everybody that you’ve ever met up until now
I wanna know the who, the why, the what, the where, the how


Do I go left?
Do I go right?
Gettin' through the day
To make it to the night
Do I go up?
Do I go down?
Which way do I go
To not hit the ground?


My generation is the one that’s gonna find a way
We do it every night, we do it every day

We'll come together and we'll make it a people decision
And then we'll learn to make a difference in the world we live in

Is greed the only way? I think that’s not the case
It’s really simple it comes down to a matter of taste

Only when you take the time to understand the human race
Then we'll have a moment to reflect, amazing grace

Crazed by history laced, challenges people have faced
Once you really know your self then that’s when you'll find your place

When you’re standing at the cross roads remember my verse
I know you’ll make it through the worst

Do I go left
Do I go right
Gettin' through the day
To make it to the night
Do I go up
Do I go down
Which way do I go
To not hit the ground

My generation is the one that’s gonna find the love
We’re looking down below, we’re looking up above

And everything you’ve ever wanted its all up to you
As long you know how to dream then your dream'll come true

All the potential that you’ve ever needed is around
Don’t be afraid of anybody that’s bringing you down

Do the things you wanna, do the things that keep you feeling great
I know you know its not too late!
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Post by Kazuma on Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:38 pm

what the F is this doing in friggin Staff....
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Post by chimes- on Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:41 pm

You sure this isn't from a song this time Sat?
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Post by Satanic on Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:42 pm

Its not
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Post by Eissa_Me_Mario on Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:54 pm

BUT it was rlly good
very nice job
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Post by Kazuma on Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:57 pm

Satanic... if you wanted to sumbit this for a contest.. I said PM me not post it on the forum. Now you still don't have an entry and I'm closing the Poetry Entries. So hurry
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Post by Satanic on Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:58 pm

That cool, I just wanted to share what I wrote. But thanks anyway!
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Post by Kazuma on Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:00 pm

you couldn've shown what you wrote ... for money and a medal. Oh well hopefully your making it right now...
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Post by Satanic on Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:01 pm

What can you do?
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Post by Zero on Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:10 pm

LMAO. Anyways nice poem. Way way better than Chimes- and Choni's. Wayyyyyy better!

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Post by Satanic on Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:12 pm

Thanks Man I liked it to
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Post by Satanic on Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:54 pm

I reely enjoyed writing it
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Post by Satanic on Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:01 pm

Pls comment
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Post by Kazuma on Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:06 pm

dont double or triple post. Just edit your post instead of that.
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Post by Satanic on Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:08 pm

OK
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Post by Ruri on Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:42 pm

Didn't like it at all
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Post by Satanic on Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:59 pm

Why the hell not?
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Post by Ruri on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:07 pm

Cause I didn't? There's no rule against having my own opinion...
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Post by Satanic on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:10 pm

Thats fine, but what didn't you like, the rymese
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Post by Ruri on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:22 pm

1) I don't know. It just didn't strike a chord with me.

2) It's spelled RHYMES
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Post by Satanic on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:23 pm

I DON'T CARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And just to tell you lol isn't a real word either
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Post by Ruri on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:30 pm

Did I ever say "lol" was one? If I did, it's my mistake for being a hypocrite.

And I only mention the spelling as C/c. It's important (especially in forms of writing - like poetry) to have your words spelled correctly and used in the correct context.
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Post by Satanic on Fri Feb 27, 2009 5:47 am

Whatever!!
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Post by Nothing on Sun Jul 19, 2009 9:04 pm

This is do I go, by Evren. Stop stealing songs and saying they're your poems. Try to write your own poem.

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