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Post by Eissa_Me_Mario on Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:04 pm

I know you're gonna say it's to short so I'm writting to short ones!!

#1 Trust Me:
trust in me
cause i know the pain

trust in me
cause i know the cold nights

trust in me
cause i know the lonliness

trust in me
cause i know my heart

trust in me
cause i know my soul

trust in me
cause i know what i give

trust in me
cause i know who i am

trust in me
cause i know what i want

trust in me
cause i know i can trust you! !


#2 You give me Strength:

You give me strength to live
You give me stength to love
You give me stength to laugh
You give me strength to learn
You give me strength to listen
You give me strength to leave
You give me strength to lift

You give me strength to do all things through you

Without you
I would probably be nothing
Without you
my life would probably be completely blue
and this is the honest truth


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Post by Satanic on Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:14 pm

No2 was the best.
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Post by Kazuma on Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:20 pm

Okay.. and also I agree #2 was the better one~
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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:36 pm

same, but # 1 was really good too Smile
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Post by Satanic on Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:53 pm

In No1 i think u used ``trust me`` way 2 much
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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:08 pm

thats the point, to get the point across...
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Post by Ruri on Sat Feb 28, 2009 6:56 am

#1 was the best I think.
Didn't like #2 so much
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Post by Eissa_Me_Mario on Sat Feb 28, 2009 9:04 am

LOL
thx guys
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