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Post by chimes- on Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:54 pm

There are times that I have heard the word no
There are times when things just wouldn't go
I hate the part at the end
When one of the main characters
Ends up dead
Sitting
Dying
At least I'm trying
Trying to snap
All of this darn
Crap
Apart
I see the light
At the end of the tunnel
I am the one moving
Stupid rocky funnel
Everything seems to be in the moment
I hate rhyming
Mirror mirror
On the wall
Who is the ______ of them all?
Make up your own adjective
I don't really care
This poem is crap
And so is my hair?
(I need to wash it soon)

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This is the shittiest poem I have ever written
Lol
C/c
If you're gonna say something stupid, don't say it.





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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:56 pm

I like it! its very.. different, but in a good way
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Post by chimes- on Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:58 pm

lol, I think thats it's crappy...
but y'know
I guess it lightened my mood.
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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:01 pm

its actually really good
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Post by Satanic on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:02 pm

I'm gonna say something stupid, it sucked cuz i'm confuzed
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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:03 pm

guess wat? now we BOTH have boyfriends named thomas!lol
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Post by chimes- on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:03 pm

Lol, you ding dong!
I said that
but mehh.....
its true Razz
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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:04 pm

you kno wat sat. i learned something very valuable today, you dont have something nice to say, dont say it
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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:05 pm

no, but he asked me out today and i said yes, so its only official TODAY
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Post by Satanic on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:07 pm

We all know and Jake wants to know whan ur going 2 2nd base
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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:09 pm

2nd base? and wat wud that be? kiss?
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Post by Satanic on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:10 pm

If Jakes asking it probably much bigger than that
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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:11 pm

ewwww... wait like wat?
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Post by chimes- on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:11 pm

you perve sat
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Post by chimes- on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:12 pm

STAY ON TOPIC ON MY POEM
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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:14 pm

lol
i think sat might be turning into a shelhoe lol
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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:24 pm

wat does C/c mean?
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Post by chimes- on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:29 pm

constructive critisism
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Post by chung chin on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:32 pm

i c i c
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Post by Ruri on Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:11 am

1) Off topic much?
2) Great poem actually. Not the best ever, or even your best ever, but it was actually fun to read xD
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Post by chimes- on Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:14 am

lol thanks....
that was kinda the point of it
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Post by Kazuma on Sat Feb 28, 2009 12:13 pm

Wow.... If you guys don't stop double posting I'm going to take money away. To me that didn't seem like a poem. More like a bunch of thoughts put together but not in a poem orderly fashion.... you know what I mean:P

anyways nice job, happy to see you back chimes-
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Post by chimes- on Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:04 pm

yeah I do know what you mean.
Thanks though
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